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Religious struggle


My faith is breaking apart,
my head splitting from the start
of some fanatical that’s sweeping the world,
bringing innocents to be grilled,
under the harshness of adults lies,
and hurting them so deep down inside...

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  • Snow White Sorrow
    November 2

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    *hugs* Steeeeph! I've been in religious debates inside my own head before, ish not pretty. There is me that wants to believe, and me that destroys religious evidence with logic. But I found my own comfort zone, where the two can live in harmony. My advice is this: believe what you want to believe, not what others want you to believe. And those that love you will accept it, no matter what.