Her life is suffering from loneliness
No wonder,
Maybe , she is a depressed one
Despites all those around her
She doesn't feel
She doesn't see
She can't hear
Them
As if she were living another era
A different place
A stranger surrounded by ghosts
A dead one walking
Breathing
A lonely empty soul
Shedding tears
Seeking the joy of living
For genuine human...
No wonder,
She is a lonely depressed one
Missing to be alive ...
what do u think of my words ?
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you pretty much just described exactly how I am. Both feeling and viewed. I think the last stanza is strong as it stands, but could be strengthened a bit still. Great write
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I'm glad u liked the words ...Thank u ...
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You are welcome. And no need to thank me for liking beautiful words
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The innate sadness of this write. Another crisp hard description of what depression can do to our minds and hearts. I hear ya poet and feel your words. Deeply.
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