He lies on his bed, sweating again. The
old nightmare is back, the memories of the
fallen and the blood-soaked fields still fresh and
clean, almost as if he relives it every night.
Every night he sees them, his fallen comrades.
They haunt him with their words, their pleas
for remembrance. He cries for them, for all that
they ever fought for, all that was so nearly lost.
He tries to forget them, but finds that he can’t.
His stories of loss and pain are told worldwide,
but he still finds no relief from the unending torment
of his own private demons.
He says that it’s important to remember the wars
because then we can make sure that our children never
repeat our mistakes. He wants us to realise that the pain of
yesterday isn’t the pain of today or tomorrow.
He tells us about the past so that we can ensure
a better future for our children, and for their children.
He doesn’t ask for world peace, just that we remember the
sacrifice made by so many, for so few.
He lies on his bed, dreaming again.
The ghosts of his past are no longer despairing.
They are at rest, safe in the knowledge that
we will remember their love and sacrifice for everyone.
Author notes
It's a war-type poem.
Well? A suitable poem?
Comments
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This was really nice. I love how you were able to write about something that people from the past have suffered through. To me, a good write is when they make you feel something, obviusly not a bad feeling, and makes you feel like you're able to connect without actually going through it. Great job!


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Some of the worst things about war is the ones that went thru it, and survived. The nightmares, the sweating, flashbacks-they still linger.
Thank you for writing this . We need to remember the ones that survived.

Joe


