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Snow

I simply want to be
swept away by you
in your arms.
on a winter's day could
I find fire in your heart
or just more snow?

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  • Raining Kisses silver member
    November 7
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    stunning in its simplicity...you have very real talent my friend
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    • Evinde
      November 8
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      thanks for your constant supoport I really appreciate it.


  • Birdie
    November 6
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    Nice. I like short poems if they're any good. This one is great! It's a good question. "smile"


    • Evinde
      November 8
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      he asked me to homecoming, but its even more complicated than before. Have any boy troubles? message me! haha.

  • Eusebius
    November 2

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    oh, this IS wonderful! Short, pithy, unique and just plain wonderful... it is difficult to write a good short poem... but this one fills the bill!!!

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