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Faking who you are

you look so innocent.. but your halo is held by the horns of the devil that lives inside of you. And he’s trying to get out.. to get the last human shred you have. I can see the wild look you have in your eyes.. You want to run away. I can see that you want to sleep again. You want the peace you had before you gave over to the side of death again.

The Memories are holding this pain inside.
And all you want is to let it all out. The memories are strangling you, cannot they see behind the lies covering your eyes. The heart feels the pain of yesterday, Scars that do not heal. You smile just once. And your mind flashes to those nights. When you broke the end of all time to see the lies you spread, the truths you hide, to feel the pain of victims past.

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  • "that lives inside of you" - "that" should be "who"

    This is an interesting bit of prose that seems to have an inside track to another person's motives. There is a lot of heated emotion in this work and it makes one wonder what could have caused such anger.

    Lots of good imagery and expression. Thank you for sharing. ~The Blue Lamp