the cellar door: hints at whats behind it
the crack under it gives no clues
entranceway to somewhere I'm sure
just the sounds and smells are to blame
I hear the bell
It asks for more
but, what I don't know
battle cries must be baptized
the care of souls you've put on me
It will be a sad time for us all
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not done with it...
and away we go
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I'm not quite sure what to make of this(in a good way)cos its got me intrigued,like a beautifully described mystery.Montey
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I think this is a good start. The last stanza doesn't seem to fit with the first two. Maybe it needs more of a transition. Keep working on this one, I'm sure it will be good!.
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yeah i felt the same thing
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Even unfinished its out of this world. Amazing as always. I can't ever seem to find anything you need to change about anything...
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