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pistachio


Guys are like green pudding;

but you,

you are something special. You are like that unexpected but pleasant pistachio nut that is a surprising delight at every spoonful. Mixed into pudding and I can't even swallow your repulsive taste, but when I can have you alone, you are the perfect level of sweetness.


And I’ve tried walnuts and cashews before;

but you,

you are something special.




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pistachios.

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