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Wonder

Distant promise

Hearts on hold

Be they honest

Love is owed

Few so truly

Care and more

True inner beauty

Seeking for

Rounding days

Dreaming nights

Passions ways

Embrace me tight...

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  • Renai
    November 2

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    I find a constant companionship within your words to my inner child. There is an understanding in such few words. ^_^


  • SilentlyAlive
    November 2

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    Hey this is great! I like the simplicity of it, much of great poetry is wasted by dragging things out by which makes the reader lose interest in what you've written. you on all accounts have not done that, i think its a great write few words yet full of great meaning, i look forward to seeing more from you, and as always I encourage you to keep the pen moving and the voice flowing great job

    -Kevin