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Expressed Gratitude

Every day is new upon each dawn,
feel like leaping like a young fawn.
Admiring the creation my eyes contain,
as I can take a breath in happy refrain.

Being able to enter His courts with Praise,
in good health to dance with hands I raise.
Realizing the strength as I work and tarry,
for the man that He allowed me to marry.

Honored for the children He gave me to bore,
to one day see them serve Him even more.
I continually bless His Holy name,
for the two grandsons I can claim.

Feeling almost poor yet thankful that I am rich,
my situation can change with His power switch.
Entering His gates with humble thanksgiving,
this grateful heart has another day of living.

Opening the gifts that He's given me,
prayers answered in timely victory.
Provision of all things that I need,
my hand held as He takes the lead.

Speaking to myself in spiritual song,
psalms, hymns sung all the day long.
Making melody in my heart as of today,
singing to the Lord who gave this day.

I am thankful for everything in my life,
for every trial that ever brought strife.
Blessed be His name who could take away,
yet gave grace to me so I won't ever stray.

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Prompt: Thankfulness

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    November 5

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    A beautiful testimony to our Lord and savior and the thankful Blessings you have experienced throughout your life.
    I am thankful for the privelage of reading and experiencing a great blessing in my own Heart.
    God Bless.
    ED.


  • drifting cloud silver member
    November 3

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    Very warm and comforting - this is what thankfulness does for us as felt reading this poem. We are provided with just what we need for spiritual growth, the most important thing.


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 2

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    SO BEAUTIFULLY SAID

    Even through our disgruntled times, and times of not believing we do down deep keep that faith, that love alive. As we climb up from being down we realize we are blessed and will always be loved.


  • Desire gold member
    November 2

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    Oh My Sis!

    Wowzers! You just go on Beautiful! Love the way You penned this one and the Message delivered from Spirit Powerful stuff~
    Tugs hard and doesn't let go also with that tight rhyme!
    Bravo!!
    These lines pulled~
    Feeling almost poor yet thankful that I am rich,
    my situation can change with His power switch.

    Keep that quill dancing Yay!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice
    Best wishes in the contest~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~

  • goalsv
    November 2

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    So much knowledge to pass on to others here, I like the way you poetically let us all know that times can be tuff, yet God will guide us through.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 2

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    through the trials

    we learn so much

    we grow and notice

    appreciate much more

     

    always in awe of His wisdom

     

     

    your lovely words remind of the answers to the why's of life

     

    your grace is indeed in every word woven in your rhyme

     

    God bless you my sweet sis...


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 2

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    A true affirmation of your beliefs
    which will guide you in days when
    dark clouds threaten the hopeful
    sunlit blue skies.

    Beautifully reverent!

    M-C


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 2
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    and you expressed

    that gratitude exceptionally well sis.. well done again! i like it..


  • Amera gold member
    November 2

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    Beautiful and as always it's such a wonderful statement of faith. I feel like I'm reading the words of a saint when I come to your page. I admire your purity.

    Love,
    Amera

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