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Hating Love

I hate me because I’m a part of you
I hate you because you’re a part of me
I hate me because it seem there’s nothing I can do
To make you love me for me

I’m sick of the fact that I always cry over you
I’m sick of the fact that you never seem to care
I’m sick of the fact that I always try too
Because it seems you never will see the scars I bear

I’m tired of always trying to please you
Can’t you see you’re just pushing me away?
One day I hope you can see me and love me too
I just hope it is before we fray

I hate you because no matter what I do
There will always be a part of me that loves you

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