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Ironic Admiration

I feel the pain; my life is in disdain
Forget quatrains my words get washed in the rain
These chains remain although I hate to complain
I can’t explain why I want to jump out of a plane
A twisted mind has me blind, I always look but never find
The balance and peace that seems to leave me behind
I try to be kind and make severed ropes bind
But I’m wasting time fighting on enemies’ lines
Here come the fines, court cases, possible suspension
I lose my pension and my life without a mention
Of my wonderful works professing the perks
Of living clean, staying away when danger lurks
A soul divided, torn from the hand that provided
The pain had subsided until that look revived it
Faces can tell stories without even speaking
Looks can be deceiving but there’s bad blood leaking
I see sarcastic smiles and capture them in my files
Upload these mug shots and broadcast them for miles
So the whole world can see what you really mean
When you smile and applaud me for staying clean 

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  • AsIThink gold member
    November 13

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    Mo, this piece is a killer. I love this joint. Wow, you know this kind of writing from you snap-shot me back to just a little over a year ago when you boardcasting in high-notes. I hadn't even noticed how much time has passed since I've paid you a real visit. How does time pass so fast? I love this piece in all its raw presentation and realness. Excellent kid.

    AsIThink...


  • Layne
    November 3

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    It looks like we have both been gone from AP foe sometime...Nice to read your work again. Looks like some tough times are happening for you. I am glad you find a way to unwind through your words.

    Nice to be back


  • geckogirl silver member
    November 3
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    welcome back Mo, have missed you around AP... as always you have pulled a ripper out... cheers my friend... an awesome piece


  • blueyez
    November 2
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    Nice to see a write from you once again mo!!!
    I hope you find your peace that you so much deserve mo!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 2

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    Holy jeepers..

    Damn kid..whew, this is some powerfully deep 'bleep!' wow you finally come back to AP..but with a blazer..wow very very impressive, seriously lurking in the dark but damn..this is amazing..impressive return my 'urban' one

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