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There was a time when
Nothing could go wrong
When I was happier and
I held to that for so long

The days are different now
They drag on and I feel older
But the love in me hasn't died
My body has only grown colder

I have to push toward the light
Make myself believe in me again
But I don't want to have to fight
Because I'll have to until the end

The pain I've had to endure in this life
Has made me suffer and gets me crying
I may not ever find an end to the strife
But I know I'm a better person for trying

So today will be the day, I try to start again
I cast off my sadness, with my smile beaming
I'll embrace my new life without any restraints
This is too good to be true, I must be dreaming

I'm changing for the better, no stewing in sorrow
I'll look ahead, and no longer live my life in the past
I'll live my life how I want to, like there's no tomorrow
Yet I need to ask myself, how long will this feeling last?

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  • n.e.o.n
    November 2

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    Aw yay you wrote something hopeful. I knew you could do it. I really loved this. It's inspiring on so many levels. Lovely rhyme and flow. I have a feeling it'll last a long time.

    • I hope so, along with the confusion paranoia and bipolarism brings, it's hard to keep a grip on what's important sometimes.

      Let's hope I'm able to maintain my positive outlook on life years down the road.


  • tidoubleguher
    November 2

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    Herm! Well, you have penned quite the poem here. I thoroughly enjoyed your rhyming scheme, very nicely done. And great emotion.

    • Thanks...hope is hard to find sometimes, but when it finds you, it makes things easier. =]