little notes to me,
letting myself free.
he used to have a hold on me..
not he just hates me.
he let me free today,
but its not just like every day..
i let him go and now he hates me.
little notes to me,
let the pain settle and guide me to freedom..
let it ring!
he used to have a hold on me,
not i found someone knew
and he hates it.
he hates that he didn't win me..
his love was just a lie.
just leave me hear to die..
your words can't hurt me anymore.
just your stupid ignorancet self..
little notes to me,
written in my skin,
now that are scars..
painful beauty aren't they.
but their not for him from the reminders
of what could have been...
just mistakes
just like him.
delete me,
delete me from your memory...
take away what we were and throw it away.
i'm no longer here
neither are you..
little notes to me,
they now set me free.
Author notes
make of it as you will
A contest entry
- All Things and Everything by Darkmoon.
665 points, ended November 14, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think about this, what do you think its about?
Comments
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This was interesting. You should try letting yourself feel the emotion of the pain and poetry. Try letter form.?. Maybe. Thanks for the entry and good luck.
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at first i thought you were someone else i knew
so i thought it was her writing this to me
for a few minutes you had me freaked
I think the fact that you were able to convey your feelings to someone else
and get a reaction as if it was to them should speak for itself
you did a great job conveying everything
its an amazing poem.
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