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Nocturnal Contemplation

Observing spaces between thoughts--
Voids deep as eternity.
These are what the ancient saints stood above.
Into them they peered and understood:
Only the silence between thoughts gives truth.

It is a journey one must make alone,
Into that divine silence,
Where from shadows light forms.

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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 6

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    Even within the divine silence, there are thoughts and sounds pulsating within our brains to soothe and savor, it appears. This is a wondrous piece, Scribe. Good to see your writing on this board once more, Sweetie.



  • Magnetic Storm
    November 3
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    Only the silence(s) between thoughts give(s) truth. --Pick one.

    Nice write. Good, clear concepts.

    • Lord Gegishov
      November 3
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      Thank you very much for pointing out that error for me. Somehow I overlooked it. It's been corrected since. I hope it will lend even more clarity to the piece.