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Knowing you in Memories

I have memories.
Yesterday, today,
Tomorrow: many days.
You lived in them.
You were in my memories.
Suddenly you've come to life.
Suddenly you're here.
Not in the future, in now.
I don't know what to feel
I know you in my memories
gentle, kind, brave.
unreliably goofy.
Not well thought through
How can I see you?
I only know you in memories.

Author notes

Ah, what to say about this? Romantic confusion? An ex of mine suddenly comes back into my love, and honestly, what can one think of it? After such a long time now I must learn to get to know him again? He wants to be with me still...Boys.

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  • Very beautiful, and you tell me you are no good at poetry? Simply astounding, and to think I inspired this on some degree is just breathtaking.

    Please keep up your brilliance with words.


  • Grey.Area.
    November 2

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    Wow this is awesome.

    Love the flipping in and out of time phrases.....

    definatly shows the confusion.

    Good job..... another piece of awesomeness.

    Louise.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 2

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    They breeze in and out of our lives....some loves...we never know what to think...You have expressed your feelings and ours quite well here!


    • chibiakutenshi
      November 2
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      Aha! Yes they do. Thank you. I have felt kind of insecure about my poetry lately, so it's nice to get some good feed back from someone who isn't just a kind friend. I really want to get better.


  • bunnyslasher157
    November 1
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    Yes.. Boys. lolz. Good job with this. Good job, good luck, and keep writing!!

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