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gristle in my drumstick

this wasn't the first time
per se,
that the thought blew over
my eyes, tumble weeded and very
dry.

a cloud of dust
ate the town
the people so
thin and meatless, their mouths all made
perfect O shapes black holes
thin red tongues yelling
something.

but i couldn't make it out
i didn't know it
until i really
knew it.

that i wouldn't
find it
here, it was over
the fields were
barren

and

if i couldn't plant
here, what, really
is so different
between people here
and people
anywhere___





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  • see jane sing
    November 20
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    this makes me think of my home town lubbock texas. it is dry and flat, no ocean, no lakes, no mountains or hills. just dirt and dried up cotton fields. i like it.


  • autarky
    November 2
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    love this to death.