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Love is....

Your first kiss on your front steps
saying goodnight
Wondering if your father is spying

Butterflies in your stomach when you
see him in the hallway
and he looks straight into your eyes

Knowing that he loves your enough
to call you in the evening
to say goodnight

One more call in the morning
to see how you slept
and say your smile is his light

A walk in the park on a spring day
holding hands
watching jealous faces

Knowing he is the only one
for you
without going through those love mazes

Love is....
his undying love for forever on

It is something
two people share
a forever bond

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