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Scattered thoughts...

I am you, you are me
he is her, she is he.

All connected as the whole,
playing each and every role.

New life lessons well learned,
won't be there when spirit returns.

We are God's atoms, just toys in his hand.
He throws us like jacks to see where we land.











Author notes

I believe a lot of things...but mostly we are all the same energy...thus always connected...
'And God to me is the Grand Order of the Divine. Not some "human" like spirit.
It is us...and we are God....I know that tweaks a lot of people...but it is what I believe.

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  • drifting cloud silver member
    November 14

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    You made me smile with the last lines.

    I agree. We are all pieces of God, perhaps in different states of consciousness, but all One -- just experiencing different bodies and energy which we selected. The physical-astral world is all connected in one great matrix and the mind, the same is connected as One.


  • Melee Vau gold member
    November 14

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    that is a very buddhist view - we are all connected and whatever happens to one, happens to us all. I like the fatalistic ending - reminds me of the Shakespeare King Lear quote: "like flies to wanton boys are we to the gods they kill us for their sport".
    great write.


  • penman gold member
    November 13
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    Wonderful

    What a terrific write. So very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest