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One Last Wish

One wish,just..one..wish/is all I ask,is all I desire/one last dream,please remove your wrath leave me alone,let me be/yet don't leave me /Paradox,I know,Who created me./Please let me go where my soul doth deserve/Thou Whom alone can kill the soul/Sever that silvery shaky cord/and slay my shattered dying soul/Loose me from this hairy hellish hell/Break these torturous shackles of unbearable pain/piercing torments of indescribable neve r ending sorrows/and grievous grave grief./One last wish..one last.. dead desire/One last line,one... last plea/as I give up the ghost of hopeless hopes/I implore Thee forgive me!/Not just for these words and feelings of negativity,/and great ingratitude./Forgive me,slay my  soul,loose me/Let me go..for I can truly bear..no...more.

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  • Oh.My.Juliet
    November 9
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    Wow, this makes me speechless. I love this piece, keep writing!

    x

  • Purrsanthema
    November 3

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    Oh dear, you sound like where I've been. A person can only take just so much betrayal.
    I think of Job. Please take the greatest care. We love you.


  • Amera gold member
    November 2
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    May your wish be granted!






    Love,
    Amera


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 1
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    aaahhhh..

    i hurt for you.. plz try to be strong my friend..