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confessional: taken





if I could peer through the pages
of hidden soul,
I’d know words were written
in invisible ink
and I’d feel the edges
unfurling around the known
only to be captured –
like the taking of innocent emotion




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  • Peteskid gold member
    November 9

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    yes, such unknowns, so many people mistake belief for reality, seems we know very little and that is the reality; everything finds a hope or a dream, a wish and faith becomes a way of having something we cannot be sure of... the human condition, so much we do not know...PK


  • redbird
    November 9
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    pretty.

  • Havn't read you in awhile, not since my last incarnation on AP. This piece is wondefully emotional, the sparsness accentuates the "edge" and the close is such a potent image.


  • the atlantic
    November 5
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  • Rowan gold member
    November 2
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    nice to see/read you again. Don't be such a stranger.


  • stasis
    November 2
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    Beautiful.


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 1
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