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I am desprate for change
I need you in my life more then you know
I am sorry for what I did
I miss you and hate the things I did
When we split I headed in to the state of unknown and hurt
My sacrifice for you should be enough
To show you how deep my love is for you
What I did was not good it was in fact foolish
All of the games and things that were done were not right
I do want you in my life
I do want us back to how we use to be
In fact I am sitting here thinking about you right now
If i have to spend the rest of my life making you happy
I will I love you with all of my heart and am willing to prove it to you
We are the only ones that matter

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