We've got a full bottle
and half the night.
Drink up, undress,
leave your inhibitions at the door.
Take my hand,
let's make this evening
one we'll never remember.
A contest entry
- Prompt: we've got a full bottle and half the night by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended November 12, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I loved this poem. Intense.
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Thanks.
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Thank You for Your Entry ~
memorable;
I love the third line, it is
inviting and sexy without
being "in-your-face"
best of luck
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Teehee very nice. Never done that myself =P But that's possibly all for the best.
*applauds*
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Neither have I.
Kids like me don't drink xD
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yeah..
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Yayz clappies :3
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the end means so much to me
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Awez :|
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