Small soul in big world,
The bird lingers in oak bone,
Resting free and proud.
Author notes
Inspired by this photo --> http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2464/621.jpg?1257540249
Checked with to make sure its 5,7,5 on http://www.haikuwithteeth.com/index.php
A contest entry
- BIRD ON A BRANCH HAIKU by Swan song.
800 points, ended November 7, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think is good, bad and/or needs rephrasing?
Comments
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i like the first line of this well done
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Very lovely picture to picture.
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