Be bold for the gospel
Give God the power to control
Every soul that is saved
Is a miracle to be proclaimed
We are building God's kingdom in a fallen planet
Every day it grows larger as the truth becomes apparent
The spirit sweeps up arm fulls but leaves out mountains
Why isn't everyone invited to experience the victory over sin?
We don't know, but we do know this
We will not stop until God's work is finished
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The content is great - the rhyme is absent except for the 5th and sixth lines where it id definetly forced - a free-verse poem should flow like honey with rhyme left out completely - L2 needs revamping - "God is in control" we cannot give control. Keep on keeping on for the Gospels sake - Bless God - Joe - dobar dan ------------------------------------------------------- peace
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While his isn't on a topic of particular interest or appeal to me,I can appreciate that it is a well written and well thougght out poem.It has a nice pace and it's easy to read.Maybe one more line in the second stanza,just for balance?An extra lin could go in after the first line in the second stanza to elaborate on what you are saying.Good read.
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Your aspirations are inspiring. Thought i would pen down the following words that came to me when i read this poem....
An Army for the Lord....
Let us raise it. Let us build it
Let us give back what he has given us
Let us give back Love
An army of Love powered by His word....
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hahaha
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Alsome
Poetry n dedication to God and I understand how u feel. Alsome write and beautiful job. Bright and wonderful. Gorgeous write once again -
Simple but beautiful.
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I really love the last line. "We will not stop until God's work is finished." Excellent conclusion to a beautiful piece of poetry. Keep the ink flowing hun!
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Thanks.
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Yeah!
"The spirit sweeps up arm fulls but leaves out mountains
Why isn't everyone invited to experience the victory over sin?"
Everyone should be invited to experience the victory over sin!
Your poem reminded me of the song that asks why the parts of the Body aren't doing their jobs.
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Gotta love Casting Crowns.
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hmmmmm
not my style but it used to be
I dug it. The imagery you used here was pretty much incredible and made me wish for brighter times....Thanks for sharing, clappies to follow
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Thanks for commenting on the "The Carpenter". Your excellent poem His Work where you remind us to be bold for the Gospel. I have a poem entitled "Bold move" about four Biblical women who did just that. Great to see such writing from you and your comparatively young age. Change your world by what you write- it is definitely possible.
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I especially love the line "We are building God's kingdom in a fallen planet".
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AMEN!!!
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This is a wonderful poem filled with some thought provoking lines. I really liked the last sentence. It shows great strength to work for God.
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This is good. The end seemed a bit choopy but other than that i liked it.
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Great girl! Fine words!
congratulations!
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Hey
Sis this poem is amazin. I loved the poem and the power through out this write. It's beautiful and amazing. keep da ink flowing bc its alsome
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May we have the ability with His help to keep going
Till all of his children are home safe for good...mac
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I love this poem, it is short but very strong. Your words say a lot about your spirit great work. I love the flow and the way you end this. SH
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