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The day to Cry.

Today is the day to cry.
I wish you wouldn't leave but you must.
I love you so much,
and i want to see your dream come true,,
but i dont want you to be away.
I will try to stay strong,
but i cant promise anything.
All i can say is I LOVE YOU,
and Today Is The Day To Cry!!!!

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  • VampireKitty-
    November 27
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    AWW...thats sweet and sad at the same time good write very well done


  • Hurt-love
    November 26
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    Amazing piece! So many people relate to this!


  • Starme
    November 4
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    Aww, what happen????


  • Tainted-Faith
    November 4

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    Your poem may have a different story behind it but its a wonderfull poem,
    and loved it.
    When you really love someone, sometimes its best to let them go...


  • xXIsolatedXx
    November 1
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    this is really good; if you truely loved someone, you would let them do what they wanted

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