Shadows shifting over the surface,
Hair the color of white,
Her body floating through the dark waters.
Dying red roses,
A white veil over her face,
Hiding the tears,
That she cried for him.
Thin sliver dress,
Diamond tiara,
Eyes closed,
As if in a deep sleep.
Lips the color deep blue,
Pale skin,
And a glowing spirit that guides her soul,
To the new path she calls home.
Love,
As in when boy meets girl,
And they fall madly in love.
Tears,
As in her betrayal she went through,
To finally get peace.
Death,
As in boy tricks her,
Kills her and locks her heart in a box,
Where it stays beating,
Till the day he suffers the same...
Author notes
Prompt 23:
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A contest entry
- DARK PROMPT CONTEST - Wordbank, Title, Quote or Picture - by redmoonnrizing by redmoonnrizing.
1000 points, ended November 9, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do ya think?
Comments
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I think that this is an amazing write. Great for that contest.
"And a glowing spirit that guides her soul,
To the new path she calls home."
My personal favorite lines. It really shows heartfelt emotion. I look forward to reading your other writes.
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GREAT JOB MAN!!
YOU SHOULD SEROUSLY WIN THIS CONTEST! YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER!!!
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You did very well with your prompt. This has great imagery and flow! Loved these lines
"Shadows shifting over the surface,
Hair the color of white,
Her body floating through the dark waters."
Thanks for entering and Good Luck in the Contest! -
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