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Confession Of A Bluesy Heart

My world had been colorless since the day  you said goodbye
pain and sorrows adorned my heart
sadness and solitude became the sanctuary for my desires
slumber is always obscure since the summer of your love had fade
and the colors of your spring had gone

And like daybreak I'm broken, sinking like the sun
and with the night I'm swallowed when the deep shadows come

Days are now filled with tears, moments are filled with pain
thoughts are filled with memories, dreams are filled with nightmares

Sometimes when peaceful sleeps encloses me
I inhale you in my dreams
fashioning your images flowering into beautiful shapes
these dreams are what holds me

Wherever he runs to, I will miss him with my heart.

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  • ryszard
    November 21
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    Confession my heart: I always return to your poetry Sayuri


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 1

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    Wherever he runs to, I will miss him with my heart. such sadness in your words.. i feel the pain from lose in each line penned .. well said hun heartfelt piece.. thank you for penning for me Hugs Angel♥