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You Must

You will never have this chance again
try to not lose sight
You don't want to look back at what could have been
when you lay down at night

There are many years ahead of you
don't throw it all away
Before you know it will be through
just take it day by day

Remember why you came here
it's not as bad as it seems
I think if you lose your fear
you will find your dreams

Finish what you started
and the world will be yours
Only the strong hearted
shall pass these hallowed doors

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    November 5

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    By losing our fears we wil definitely find our dreams..but only if we believe in them. This is a great poem but as only you can motivate yourself to do anything!

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    • bluecollarlove
      November 6
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      I have to disagree with only you can motivate yourself.You might not be able to make someone want it but if they do you can motivate them to do it.TY for your comments and have a great day


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 1

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    Wow, this one left me speechless. This really moved something inside of me. I love the truth and your rhyming was great! Thank you for entering!! Good luck

    • bluecollarlove
      November 6

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      My son just started college and I have had to think about this and talk to him about choices lately.Stick with it and you will never be sorry.Good luck.