With Faith

It is in night
that window
displays reflection,

yours; no competition
with whatever finds
place on a blank wall.

You raise my perception
and keenly I watch your
breath immerse with
plight of rays to seperate
itself from dust.

I travel the road-map
of your glory,

it surfaces as does
creatures that seek
connection with
an outer world;

in this case
love,

I give whole-heartedly;

heaven's gift

to me

for my faith.

A contest entry

Killer Words by misticmoonlite. 1075 points, ended November 8, 14 entries
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prophetic7poet
November 25
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Faith Is
Like light, should always be simple and unbending. You are soo right faith and I know that you will shine through the darkness to reach other poets. Congrats
keep up the good work
misticmoonlite
November 3
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killer words
you do share with a punch faith is awesome when one can immerse in it, thank you for joining in
good luck
Linda
Swangrnv
November 1
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your words
caress the soul with your gentle touch.. excellent my friend..
John BoSox
November 1

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A love story..you say it all in your thought expression..I can feel your emotions..almost taste them..This poem is seductive to me..You have a way of providing suggestion, not intent..You force the reader to read between the lines..You force us to think..As a poet, this is imperative..You seem to get it..I need to become a detective when I read your poems..You are tough to solve.I need to work hard to achieve your intent..congrats

John
michael thomas
November 1
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you are such a gentle soul. it is so reassuring to know that people like you are around.
thank you.