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naked

reality undefined
striped down
to bear bones
broken

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  • GuardianPhoenix7289
    November 13

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    Short, and to the point. The beginning sets you up for one thing, so as to look at the poem as a whole differently. I liked it! To have one's reality broken like that and undefined, is an all-too saddening thing. Thanks for sharing!