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Guarded

I will armor myself
with blades of grass and sliver spoons.
Their lies, a valley of danger
beyond the crest above.

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  • Emerald-Spirit
    November 30
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    I like these kind of poems, it has a deeper meaning and that is what makes it remarkable. Great write.


  • Green Stars
    November 1

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    Magical

    I love this so much....I get a sense of surreal unease..of crystal waiting..of knights and ladies...a fairy land beyond the crest..a jewel of a poem....