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What is it like to die?

Have you ever wondered what it's like to die
To feel your last breath roll off your lips
The blood already beginning to crack and dry
Heart beat barley even a blip

Death,Now I think
Won't hurt, not a bit
It will be more like a blink
Although I must admit

Dying, with be the painful part
Last thoughts that of your botched
life,Before your soul doth depart
You think of all you have watched

Of all the sins you've been the source
Is this sadness right to endorse?

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  • fallendust
    November 2

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    I like this one! Well done! I like the topic discussed in it. Interesting to think about actually.