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Morning Calisthenics

summer morning rain
washes the upturned faces
of wakening flowers

a rainbow arches
its bridge of brilliant light -
a salmon's curved leap

the sun yawns, stretches
and hurls its golden spear
to pin daylight down

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  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    November 6
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    Wonderful job here. I do love a nice poem about nature and rain and the cute animals.

    • Bad Bill
      November 6
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      Thank you, Tqop, for your kind words.

      Cheers,
      Bill