Water on skin
glistening.
My eyes drawn to your naked flesh
Misty screen obscures your true form.
Steam filled room billowing clouds of warmness
touches my face.
Inhaling scented air.
I draw closer now, my own naked form warmed.
Your back that gentle curve where fingers linger.
My hands touch sacred flesh
I press gently
your buttocks round and soft send sensations of dancing butterflies..
Gentle kisses I place with tender touch tracing your neck, your shoulders..
She breathes soft and shallow
Every breath I sence.
My yoni aches for her touch.
Fingers grasp the air
Deeper her breathing faster ...
Heart beat rising.
She turns..
Her nipples erect touch mine
Electricity passes between us...
Passion rising
Teeth bite tenderly
Her hands find that sacred place where only lovers know
Having tasted of that bodily pleasure the shattering thrill of climax
Our bodies collapse unable to take anymore...
A contest entry
- Give Me Hot Lovin' by StarlightCerulean.
1000 points, ended November 10, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Whoa
hello m'lady how you have created such an erotic piece as such with the great words of imagery this is pleasent and shows an erotic love for the two of them it's like a balled of despair agony and love in one poem well done m'lady i love it all of it
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Very erotic and loving and so tastefully expressed. A really good read.
Mike -
I feel an outsider...but enjoyed the writing.
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Beautiful flow and form. I'm not a chick, but if i was, i'd probably melt. very good...my ex read it too but forgot to comment. great job.....she wanted to take a shower (THANK YOU BRO)
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