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Even a White Sparrow doesn't go unnoticed

A sparrow doesn’t fall
without Him knowing.
every hair he has numbered
every thought and whim.

each star in the heavens,
has a beautiful name
not one goes without
His notice…

each heart he sees,
tears we cry he keeps,
with the words we utter
within our very souls,

why does a sparrow,
go for such little cost?
if our love ones were lost
He remembers…

in paradise you will be,
said Jesus, to the evildoer
that died along side him,
that’s when I’ll see my love
again…

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Prompt: White Sparrow

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  • prankstar
    November 1
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    This was very well written. a privilage to have in my contest. Thank you for entering.


    ---prankstar