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Fireflies (Haiku #2)

Sparks of light dancing
A midsummer night's ballet
Under Father Moon

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  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    November 6
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    I love this. It's so adorable. I love the idea of the stars dancing. Great job here.


  • Shantti silver member
    November 3

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    I love fireflies. And I completely missed them this year. I don't know why they weren't as plentiful as usuall, but they were definately missed.
    Beautiful imagery here. Thank you for entering


  • Simply Olivia
    November 2
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    I like the ballet metaphor


  • whyspr gold member
    November 1

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    oh, oh oh oh. wow. Now this paints some really awesome pictures in my mind. We used to have fields full of fireflies in MI. we would drive around in the country and watch for them.


  • Jarret F
    November 1
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    It's amazing how beautiful some things in nature are. "A midsummer night's ballet".
    Well said, and good luck with the contest.

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