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~ Obsession For An Orator ~

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I love the way your lips lay words
like feathers on the edge of air.


Such eloquence enchants my ear.
With every breath your sound becomes my song.


I sing along,
following the conversation’s curve
  
 
long miles to your mouth,
faltering on the foothills of a kiss,
 

when this


obsession for an orator
names the night as narrator

in the tale of two whose hearts are one,

lying
 naked together,

undone
 

in a void vernacular vacates
and enunciation emigrates,


certifying space
 for tongues to taste
the silent grace


of starlight on silk skin.

 

 

 

 

(c) Stuart Higginson 1.11.09


   





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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 6

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    This is an elegant and tender journey you've led your readers on, Stuart. Your use of language is subtle, while your metaphors are crisp and delightful. Indeed, our obsession with the written and spoken word is immeasurable, as is our desire to strive ever onward, pursuing the path that whispers our names so softly, so assuredly. Thank you for entering my contest, my Friend. Good luck, Sweetie.




    • Stuart Higginson gold member
      November 6

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      Many thanks Wanda. Great contest! Will try and put the muse's nose to the grindstone for your Ted Hughes contest over the weekend/week ahead


  • ccawley gold member
    November 3

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    Very brilliant...the theme of orator and the speech of love
    making the flow of eloquent discourse a sensual recital.
    Love, "conversation's curve
    long miles to your mouth
    faltering on the foothills of a kiss,"

    I admire your writing!!!


    • Stuart Higginson gold member
      November 3
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      Many thanks Cheryl, I appreciate the compliment and encouragement. I am looking forward to spending much of the weekend ahead catching up on reading my faves, once this hectic week is over Will be pointing my mouse in your direction very soon, and am sure to be enthralled once again

  • i love this....um i really dont know what to say exactly. its really good, keep up the exelent work.

  • i have to say this one is one of your most interesting, i have no idea what to say about it, but still i am drawn by it, keep it flowing


    • Stuart Higginson gold member
      November 2
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      Ah Aaron, it is enough to know you enjoy my words at all ~ what more could a fellow poet and reader ask, than that?

      Popping over your way in a mo to have a read - I think I owe you a few thousand by now


  • ApollosMuse
    November 1

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    i absolutely agree...striking is the right word...wow...this is just visually stunning!!i really am lacking words here!!


    • Stuart Higginson gold member
      November 1
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      Many thanks, AM, I appreciate the complimentary comments you've left for this piece

  • If I had copied down on all the lines that are completely striking from this piece, I would've basically copied the whole thing!

    This is breathtaking. Truly.

    ya All~Ways,
    ~ Jan ~


    • Stuart Higginson gold member
      November 1
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      Many thanks Jan, I appreciate the encouragement your words lend to me. If only I could award a gold trophy for "most avid reader"! Ironically, it took me longer to edit and post this poem on here, than it did to write the first draft Not sure why I am having such wrangles with the text editor lately!

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