Did you ever think I could be the one?
That I was the one who got away?
The sole being that could of helped you.
That could have loved you.
I
By living I defy you.
Moving on,
I shatter your false reality.
Becoming distant.
Need
Because your so far away,
Did you think it wouldn't hurt?
That I wouldn't bleed?
That every day for the rest of my life, I wouldn't feel it?
You
Every breath I take,
I take to spite you.
But every step I step,
Brings me to the edge.
Here
Hate and love become one emotion.
Hating you for letting me go,
Loving you for everything else.
Game over.
A contest entry
- I want Dark, and Sad poetry by Night Rose.
550 points, ended December 4, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Night rose
wow lots of emotion of love and hate for hwhat the relationship is between you two. very good write adn good luck -
Let me just say wow
Lots of strong emotion.
I love the set up and everything.
sole is spelt wrong. it's soul. sorry I hope that that's okay to let you know.
you're very talented keep up the good work.
(oh and sorry that I comment so much)
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