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Fears

my shaky finger tips would softly brush your cheek
my burning hot cheek would lightly brush yours
my tender lips would find yours and never want to depart
my heart would pound so hard
you are sure to hear it
I would be shaking all over in your arms
with goosebumps that would never go away
only you can make me feel like that
only you can make me scared like that
not scared to be in your arms
but scared to lose you..

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  • FrozenredTears
    November 17
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    <3


  • vampireintherain
    November 12
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    Oh it is sweet and lovely the work it is good ^-^


  • TAPSCreeperBabyBird
    November 9

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    I wish I could say this about the person I love, but I just can't because he doesn't even know I exist, or he does, but he has no clue that I have any feels what so ever about him. I think he thinks that I hate him. I wouldn't be suprised because I am nasty to him. To make matters worse, I have to leave him in the middle of June and I might never see him again.

  • JToddUnderhill
    November 7

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    Wow....

    ..... good write and no man should be worthy of a poetess love this strong. Even if your weren't my neice I don't think I would approve.


  • XXWolfOfInsanityxX
    November 1
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    awwwwww hehe this beautiful

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