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A Walk in Autumn (Haiku #1)

Swirls of auburn, gold
Crinkly footsteps down the path:
Trees laying carpet

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  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    November 6
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    Yes. The leaves can make a pathway. Lovely job here Poet.


  • Shantti silver member
    November 3

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    "Trees laying carpet"
    It sure does seem that way when we're trying to pick up after them dosen't it
    I love this. It's the perfect tribute to fall. I can completely see the carpet of leaves (that seems neverending )
    Thank you for entering


  • Simply Olivia
    November 2
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    clever


  • whyspr gold member
    November 1
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    A very beautiful image of fall, I love fall. I can hear the carpet of leaves crunching underneath