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The Halloween that Andy built

you made a simple night
easy
you made the tension
melt
you made my attempt
for friendship
nonsexual
you made hand massages
seem normal
you made candy disappear

you made my night

you gave me your handcuffs
to play with
because you knew
I wanted them

you made it
anything
but boring
even though the party we went to
was uneventful
and lame
I was just happy
you came with me

i was myself around you
that doesn't happen all the time
and it is refreshing
to have
a platonic friendship
with someone
I thought hated me
in the past

you made my
Halloween,Andy
and hopefully
I made yours too

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  • LunaBaby1414
    November 2
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    awww short, and sweet, i love it


  • LadyLavender gold member
    November 1

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    that first stanza is powerful! I like the entire write, but the first stanza conatined a beautiful picture of purity and the perfect ingredients for something special to come about.