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Borrowed Time

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We remain In the mist of yesterday,

lips pressed through the flames

smouldering In Invisible heat

Borrowed time...slipping through

an hourglass..

Ravage the gentle merge,

You will lose your sanity just for a time

~I swear~

 

Come, lay down beside me

calm my needing flesh, bathe me In the

softest shade of blue, shimmering In

lucid reflections

Taste these fired lips, undress me In words

of an ache that burns so deep

I know not myself without you,

your skin upon my skin, held within

 

Decadent, heady senses pace quickly

the heart and soul

Lillys perfume the winds, leaving scents

we can't elude

Thigh silken whispers linger on tongue

magic, surges through fingertips...

~Currents flow~

 

 

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  • The.poet.of.hearts
    November 14

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    it was Sensationaly but it touched the limits of Erotic and this picture is just OO.. I dont think the judge will come to this page,
    thanks anyway,

    NO to Judge
    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    November 5

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    This is very sensual. My favorite lines in this one were:

    Taste these fired lips, undress me In words
    of an ache that burns so deep
    I know not myself without you,
    your skin upon my skin, held within

    Very well done.

    Mike


  • Mi Corazon Late
    November 4
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    subtle scorching passion!!!

  • Bob Fox
    November 1

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    Poet

    Searching for words I think of only...Joy, euphoria, rapture and the sweet intoxication of love. My seems so long ago. Great write poet.


    • Deceits Tears silver member
      November 2

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      Thankyou Bob It Is always a pleasure to see you, I hope all Is good In your part of the world
      Good wishes always my friend


  • sylzara
    November 1

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    Whew... is it just me or did it get really hot in here? It was very good, I love how the words rolled so smoothly together, it really does sound like a seductive lover. I dont understand 'Thigh silken whispers linger on tongue' however.


    • Deceits Tears silver member
      November 2
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      Hey there, Thankyou for droppin by and leavin a comment, It Is much appreciated,
      I guess In my Imagination "Thigh silken whispers" could be soft murmers against the skin...Just a thought
      Be Well


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 1

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    aahhh..

    Taste these fired lips, undress me In words

    of an ache that burns so deep

    I know not myself without you,

    your skin upon my skin, held within...that pretty much killed me right there! exceptional..very beautifully penned lady!


  • twelfthknight silver member
    November 1

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    This is beautiful and so sensual wonderful flow and imagery, my favourite part was

    Come, lay down beside me

    calm my needing flesh, bathe me In the

    softest shade of blue

    I really do enjoy reading your poems

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