Charlotte...
Don't you see those words that you spoke...
you did so plainly to hurt?
Are you pleased with yourself now?
that you can only talk with only such...
cruel words,
Are you pleased...?
with this distaste...
you have managed to create...
Charlotte...
Do you feel better?
is this all you can think of
to contribute to this place?
Charlotte...you say
I aren't any good...
without a consideration or a care...
filling my world with such a bitterness
in the air,
Charlotte...
are you so perfect and clean?
Why I ask...
must you be so unpleasant and mean...?
Oh Miss Charlotte...
Why do you want to...
destroy my dream?
At least...
I'm trying to do something good...
All she want to do is...
seem to us... that she is tough...
She can only deem on other people's wrongs...
She has no idea what she has missing...
Poor Miss Charlotte can only speak and act...
like she is strong
It's really such a shame...
I'm heading somewhere and I am moving on...
and little Charlotte...
has no place to belong....
So she says...
I know nothing about nothing...
You say...
I don't know how it is...
Well Miss Charlotte...
I never claim I did...
You speak so badly...
of something you don't understand,
All I'm doing is the very best I can...
finding those feet of mine...
while you just sit there and don't even notice those
scars on your hands,
You know nothing too...
I'm walking... trying to find myself...
While you sitting there writing how badly it is...
Poor Charlotte, just doesn't have a clue....
Author notes
Answer to those critics 
Simple really 
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This was really interesting to read. Simple and straight forth. Thanks so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest. Keep up the good work!
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brilliant poem, i enjoyed it very much n your end is awesome,good luck !!
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Thanks deedee
It was rather personal poem, one that I felt food after I wriiten.
I'm glad you liked it
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Way to go poet, seems like a blues tune to me...
Excellent poem to read and well I can see the subdued bit of anger, so this makes for a great rebutall I do believe.
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Thank you I wouldn't really call it poetry but it didn't half feel good writing it
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don't let things get in your way. Good luck and keep writing!!
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Yeah I have to admit the anger really did bring the best out of me for this
I really am proud of this one simply because I came direct from the heart
Thank you for saying you like my poetry! That is very kind of you to say
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Haha..good for that miss Charlotte women/ girlie...
Never let anyone come between yourself and your dream...
if they do intentionaly hurt you..just tell them to f.ck off...
I like your poetry, and just as love does, anger can bring the best up in us poets...
XXJeannette
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