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When it's time

Now bent and trapped among the kind of gold that seethes and rots
Where fear became material that wrapped a soul in knots
I made up words to dignify the agony I spoke
That turned me from a fiend to something human for a joke

As harsh as a reflection, gates were cracking at the swing
As bodies flocked a mass decay to which we looked as king
The feeblest reaction; nails were taught to rust the touch
I shut my eyes just once; a tool in wrong and killed as such

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  • liane07
    November 24
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    Great piece of writing!

    I love your use of imagery and the thoughts your piece provokes!

    Liane:-)


  • GotLilt
    November 3

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    SILVER This really got my attention. I love the rhyme and the creepy feel to it.