A light that should symbolize purity
...surrounded by a darkness that cannot deceive
The brilliance of the eye hides it all
...or leaves us to think it's hidden
What you keep from the world you store in the light
How foolish to think to conceal in the obvious
All the despair..
...truth
...hurt
...toxic love
The multiple wrongs you've done forms around the truth
Can't you see? We know what you've locked away
That which eats you at night
Murders the dreams and spills the nightmares
Revealz the bitterness you sprinkled with fake smiles
Oh yes we see it with just one look..
...into those portals you call your eyes
We see the deceit corruption and lies
They can never close..so blink them unwise one
'Cause for that instant in time you shut out the world
A contest entry
- DARK PROMPT CONTEST - Wordbank, Title, Quote or Picture - by redmoonnrizing by redmoonnrizing.
1000 points, ended November 9, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love this picture prompt and I think you have captured the essence of it very well....Great lines and imagery in this piece.
Thanks for entering and Good Luck in the Contest! -
i think its the most awesome poem that i have read in a while! so much talent you have... GOOD LUCK!
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This seems to lack a bit of punctuation. Could you please correct this
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great
an awesome take on the prompt...a great poem
you have penned here....
loved this bit...
They can never close..so blink them unwise one
'Cause for that instant in time you shut out the world
great way to end the poem
well done and keep it up
good luck to you in z contest
Jayde
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You will have a Picture Prompt located here:
Please use the image with your poem. Click on the Picture to take you to the link
This contest will end Nov 8th - Good Luck
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