I wish,I wish,
I could disappear,
without a word,
into the velveteen sky.
I'll ascend down into the water with the fish,
and please, don't come for me dear,
for it would be absurd,
for you, also, to whisper goodbye.
Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder... can you be far?
Fly me away into the moon.
I hope, I hope, I can see you soon!
Author notes
So I've been writing a lot of dark poetry lately and I'm not sure why...
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Anways, I would be grateful if you commented or critiqued this!
So what are you imagining as you read this?
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I love this. It's flow is perfect and it's all so surreal. Wonderfully written!
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Thank you so much for your comment. <3
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Velveteen Sky
gud 1, enjoyed it
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hehe, thank you so much! <3
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its an amazing poem and i love it.
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