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questioning.

I'm wondering
why I cannot seem
to see past soft voices
and pleading eyes;

why I don't seem to understand
that I have things more important
than squishing together novels in
thirty days;

why I volunteer for things
I know very well
will suck away all that is left
of my daylight

and leave me lying awake,
frantically scribbling
while everyone else
is calmly recharging




sometimes, I think I know

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I'm a sucker. >.< Blech.

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  • sgking123 gold member
    November 8

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    wow

    you are working intensely to time deadlines writing and you ask why......while you take other unimportant to costaway your time.....Loved this one hapepns with me also...visit em some time


    • AllThatRemains
      November 8
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      I think it happens to everyone, really; but yeah. -nods wisely- Thank you!


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    November 1

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    "I know very well
    will suck away all that is left
    of my daylight"

    love that.