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Don't Let Me Die

You saw my scars
you saw my secret
you saw everything
that I've been hiding
for so long.

Now you know
the situation I'm in.
I'm struggling for my life
even though
I don't want to live.

I hope you see
how fragile I am;
that one little thing
will shatter my soul
completely.

Please try 
to be a better parent for me
you are the reason
for all of my pain.

I have no control
over what I am doing,
so please,
be careful what you say;
don't let me lose hope on life,
don't let me die.

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  • peterh360
    November 19
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    hmmmmmm good


  • tragedy-awaits
    November 2
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    loved it!


  • kryz
    November 1

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    So sad , but I love the way you wrote it. Sorry for what ur goin through . Life is a battle u can never serender. Keep up the great work


  • pieces.of.me.
    November 1
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    this made me cry... great job! its absolutely amazing


  • Vanillatastic
    November 1

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    This is really sad. I'm sorry that this parent has been less than there for you, and I hope things evolve for the better. Fight for life, and you'll live.

  • so sad but really good!

  • Sad but pretty. i love it. both of our parents found out about our cutting in about the same time period. except mine found out like 2 weeks ago. =[ i know what your going through.

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