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Lá Samhna

Remains of summer,
    nature sheds it's soul
under skies,
    orange and gold;
soon life slumbers.

-AW 11/1/09

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Prompt: November's nuance (15 words)

Lá Samhna - Celtic for "November Day"

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  • islekine gold member
    November 1

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    Nice take!

    Such a soft feeling! Thanks for entering...
    Best wishes in the contest and always!

    and


  • Griswold
    November 1

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    Ver well written I will be surprised if this does not place high in this contest, excellent flow and imagery written here. Best of luck to you in the contest... Scott


  • jenadyleigh silver member
    November 1

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    Very well penned. I enjoyed reading this. You write sings november!
    Good Luck in the Contest.


  • Stickboy gold member
    November 1

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    an awesome poem you have written here , love it... best of luck in the contest
    Sean