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Snowdrift

Missing image
Cold comfort in icy eyes
leaves frozen tears
on barren cheeks
my mustache
a snowdrift

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Prompt: November's nuance

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Celestial Geyser
    November 14
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    Once again another well written and imaginative poem. It has a simple message caressed by your flawless words.


  • lianonsidhe silver member
    November 3

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    Ooh! Sumptuous!
    I was locked into the photo and didn't see the last line coming!!!!!
    Well written and very evocative! Another of your many triumphs!
    Lianonsidhe


  • Sweet Water
    November 1

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    I'm so glad our eyes and mustaches aren't frozen over yet haha
    This is a really tight poem; I love the way it flows flawlessly from word to word.
    The picture is also mysterious and sexy. Well I dunno about the bandages on her hands, but I think she needs a man hug to warm up!

    Congratulations!
    -Ariel


  • penman gold member
    November 1
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    Excellent

    What a terrific write. congrats on the gold


  • islekine gold member
    November 1

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    This is wonderful...

    Nice take...thanks so much for entering!
    Best wishes in the contest and always!

    and


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 1

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    This is awesome! Great thoughts for this picture and good luck to you.



    Jeremy0826


  • Stickboy gold member
    November 1
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    awwww I love this best of luck in the contest
    Sean

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